Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state.
Wildlife plays an important role in maintaining the balance in the Earth’s ecosystem.
With the increase in population and urbanization, more and more trees are cut down and many natural habitats have been converted into human habitats. The Governments across the world have to take strict actions and pass laws against the reducing green cover of the planet.Laws and reforms are to be made to preserve the remaining wilderness areas in their natural state.
Forests are the natural habitat for the wild animals. Wild Animals cannot survive without the Forest. The Forest and the wild animals both are dependant on each other for their existence. In the absence of forests, it is possible that wild animals can start entering the cities in search of food and shelter.
Laws are required to be implemented to preserve the wildlife as they play a very significant role in the food cycle. Balance in the biological food cycle is very crucial for the existence of life on earth. Without the balance, life will cease to exist on the planet. Excess of Animals at any stage of the life cycle can lead to devastating effects. Excess of Carnivores will lead to mass hunting of the herbivores leading to excessive growth of grass on the ground leading to a starving future for carnivores due to absence of the herbivores. So, Laws are required to maintain a balance in the ecological food cycle.
Without the forests, certain species may cease to exist. The Great Bengal Tiger is an endangered species due to reduced forest cover and excessive hunting of the animal for various greeds and pleasure. The Tiger has been poached as a sport activity and also for its skin and jaws. Elephants are poached for their tusks which are then sold in Black markets for hefty profits. So, poaching of wildlife animals should be banned and also Governments should form certain authorities responsible for implementing the laws and restricting illegal activities in the forests.
Also, Forests play a very important role in maintaining the overall temperature of the earth.
The trees help in the conversion of Carbon Dioxide present in the air into Oxygen providing more fresh oxygen in to the atmosphere. This eventually leads to decrease in the overall temperature of the globe. It is responsible for reducing the effect of global warming in a very vast manner. Forests indirectly play a crucial role in maintaining the sea level.
Therefore, Laws should be made against cutting down of forest trees, poaching of wild animals for fun or business, and the interference between the humans in the homes of wildlife animals be reduced to bare minimum. Laws should br designed to preserve the wildlife areas by converting them into National Parks and Wildlife Sanctuaries where regular efforts be made for the preservation of the forest covers.
Certain laws are to be made at global level such that they are to be implemented worldwide for the preservation of the wilderness areas. A Global Regulatory body should be formed which can create and regulate few common laws to be implemented by all the nations for the well being of the forests and the wildlife species.
So, It is important for the nations to pass laws for the conservation of the wildlife Species and the Forests for a sustainable future for life on earth. Forests are and will always play a very crucial role in our existence and so special care of them are required to be taken by us.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 272, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Laws
... the reducing green cover of the planet.Laws and reforms are to be made to preserve ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 144, Rule ID: DEPENDENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dependent' on?
Suggestion: dependent
...he Forest and the wild animals both are dependant on each other for their existence. In t...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 323, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f the forests and the wildlife species. So, It is important for the nations to p...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 90.0 58.6224719101 154% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2872.0 2235.4752809 128% => OK
No of words: 581.0 442.535393258 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94320137694 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90957651803 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66463860757 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.419965576592 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 907.2 704.065955056 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9566041387 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0344827586 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0344827586 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.37931034483 5.21951772744 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.97078651685 201% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201915057725 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493454312057 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823867737036 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814964954474 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090249690464 0.0667264976115 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 100.480337079 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 272, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Laws
... the reducing green cover of the planet.Laws and reforms are to be made to preserve ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 144, Rule ID: DEPENDENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dependent' on?
Suggestion: dependent
...he Forest and the wild animals both are dependant on each other for their existence. In t...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 323, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f the forests and the wildlife species. So, It is important for the nations to p...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.5258426966 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 90.0 58.6224719101 154% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2872.0 2235.4752809 128% => OK
No of words: 581.0 442.535393258 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94320137694 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90957651803 4.55969084622 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66463860757 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 215.323595506 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.419965576592 0.4932671777 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 907.2 704.065955056 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.2370786517 143% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9566041387 60.3974514979 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0344827586 118.986275619 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0344827586 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.37931034483 5.21951772744 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.97078651685 201% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.2758426966 165% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201915057725 0.243740707755 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493454312057 0.0831039109588 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823867737036 0.0758088955206 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814964954474 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.090249690464 0.0667264976115 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.1392134831 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 100.480337079 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.