Nations should pass laws to preserve any remaining wilderness areas in their natural state, even if these areas could be developed for economic gain.
I strongly agree with the given notion that wilderness needs to be preserved at any cost. It is but an impending doom if we do not learn to live in harmony with Mother Nature.
It is the need of the hour that we provide our undivided attention to the pressing matter of deteriorating ecosystems. One must understand that any disturbance in the tortuous web of nature may send ripples of destruction. An act as simple as deforestation is not as benign as it may seem, it brings about soil leaching, mudslides, and whatnot.
It is the root of the tress, which holds the soil firmly. It is not uncommon to see the name of yet another animal in the endangered cities. Tadoba forest, India has reported an alarming decline in the population of the Royal Bengal tigers in India. To spread awareness about the issue, the tiger was adopted as the state animal.
Deforestation in the forest lands also poses another major problem. Anjangaon, a local town was completely abandoned by people after ferocious tigers and other predators started lurking at the edge of the forest, near the town. The action of the animals was nudged due to the destruction of their natural habitat.
One of the most basic requirements, for any industry to flourish, as one may argue, is space for warehouses, production, and inventories. A few of Amazon warehouses are bigger than a college campus. One solution could be use of barren deserted lands, which disturb the ecosystem in the least way.
It is essential to pass laws for the conservation of all remaining wilderness. This is necessary to avert issues like global warming, or we may stand as witness to apocalypse scenes, not very unlike the ones depicted in 2012 and Knowing. One must also take into consideration, that many industries flourish on the raw material provided by nature. Not just paper, medicine, and food industry but nomadic people have been known for centuries to earn their bread by selling baskets made from woven bamboo, brewing up medicines from various medicinal herbs and hunting for game.
In a nutshell, one can conclude that it is essential to preserve wilderness for the over the wellbeing of all the occupants of the earth, humans and animals alike. One can easily find alternative solutions for the industrial needs of the land, one of which is land reclamation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1938.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 397.0 442.535393258 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88161209068 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75154762736 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 215.323595506 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599496221662 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.2370786517 104% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2124178427 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2857142857 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9047619048 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 5.21951772744 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14038109787 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382543521952 0.0831039109588 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504243655477 0.0758088955206 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604555084659 0.150359130593 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286781812708 0.0667264976115 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.38706741573 110% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 100.480337079 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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