Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Even before one could decide whether discussion of scandal are useful or not for the betterment of the society, one should define what kind of scandal which should be beneficial and detrimental in nature, is it a scandal about the bribery scams or the corruption scam or an affair between celebrity. obviously the bribery and corruption scam will be an eye opener for the denizens of the society, who can take matter to higher authority and the sort the matter out. So scandals are good for and weeding out the bad seeds.
Corruption is widespread evil of the society which can eat it from inside out. In these daunting situation their is a need of model leaders and citizens as well. But not all the political leaders are faithful, one who seems to be loyal leader on the outside may be corrupt from inside, some may be using the allocated money for a project for their own benefit. Until and unless these matters see the light of the day these kind of leader will keep on doing the same thing. So once this matter comes out, the higher authority should see to it and punish the culprit.
Such incidents can become a ringing bell for the others, and keeps others in check. One such incident is of cabinet minister Suresh kalmadi, who was accused of corruption scandal in the construction and management of the commonwealth village in new Delhi. Once the people and media came to know about it, they started to question about the other matters, which looked suspicious like coal-gate, MANREGA ets,. however as every thing has a good and bad side to it, sometimes innocents are driven through the mud even if they did not have any hand in it. This may sometime lead to scandals being used as a tool by the rivals to discredit a good loyal leader in ruining one's career. This will have a adverse effect on the denizens of the society and can pose severe repercussion on the development of overall success of the society.
So to sum it up scandals can be decisive tool in rectifying the unfaithful leaders, however the it should be used in such a manner as to benefit, rather than being stymie in development of the society or a nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 301, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Obviously
...on scam or an affair between celebrity. obviously the bribery and corruption scam will be...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...inside out. In these daunting situation their is a need of model leaders and citizens...
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Line 3, column 362, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Until” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ey for a project for their own benefit. Until and unless these matters see the light ...
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Line 3, column 418, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... these matters see the light of the day these kind of leader will keep on doing the same t...
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Line 5, column 407, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...d suspicious like coal gate, MANREGA ets,. however as every thing has a good and b...
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Line 5, column 410, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...uspicious like coal gate, MANREGA ets,. however as every thing has a good and bad side ...
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Line 5, column 410, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: however,
...uspicious like coal gate, MANREGA ets,. however as every thing has a good and bad side ...
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Line 5, column 701, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ining one's career. This will have a adverse effect on the denizens of the s...
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Line 7, column 93, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'it'?
Suggestion: the; it
...tifying the unfaithful leaders, however the it should be used in such a manner as to b...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'as to', 'kind of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.239234449761 0.240241500013 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.136363636364 0.157235817809 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0693779904306 0.0880659088768 79% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0382775119617 0.0497285424764 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0287081339713 0.0444667217837 65% => OK
Prepositions: 0.133971291866 0.12292977631 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0334928229665 0.0406280797675 82% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.44968769047 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0239234449761 0.030933414821 77% => OK
Particles: 0.011961722488 0.0016655270985 718% => OK
Determiners: 0.129186602871 0.0997080785238 130% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0382775119617 0.0249443105267 153% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0167464114833 0.0148568991511 113% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2145.0 2732.02544248 79% => OK
No of words: 384.0 452.878318584 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5859375 6.0361032391 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.58838876751 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.325520833333 0.366273622748 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.229166666667 0.280924506359 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.135416666667 0.200843997647 67% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0807291666667 0.132149295362 61% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44968769047 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 219.290929204 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518229166667 0.48968727796 106% => OK
Word variations: 56.7924038567 55.4138127331 102% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6194690265 73% => OK
Sentence length: 25.6 23.380412469 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4533608158 59.4972553346 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.0 141.124799967 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 23.380412469 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 0.674092028746 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 48.5166666667 51.4728631049 94% => OK
Elegance: 2.0 1.64882698954 121% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296963483969 0.391690518653 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.108040470924 0.123202303941 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0547722923263 0.077325440228 71% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.554967679484 0.547984918172 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.174034696776 0.149214159877 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13322167052 0.161403998019 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452432140011 0.0892212321368 51% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.488722988241 0.385218514788 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0407879693821 0.0692045440612 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235091945691 0.275328986314 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0256677112832 0.0653680567796 39% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.30420353982 151% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 6.0 7.22455752212 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 7.0 3.66592920354 191% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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