The chart show information about the number of kilometers traveled in an average month and the distribution of vehicle types in Britain.
The given line graph illustrates the information about the reason of travel along with the distance traveled by the people. Whereas, pie charts depict the proportion of preferred mode of transportation in Britain for the period of 20 years
As it is presented in the line graph that, above 6000 kilometers were traveled for the transport and delivery in 1990, which shoot up and peaked at 8000 kilometers in next five years. However, in 2010, it witnessed a steep fall of 2000 kilometers. Likewise, commuters traveled 3000 kilometers in initial year, yet even after experiencing a marked rise in the mid of the period it fell to its previous figure in 2010. Whereas, the least distance was traveled for the personal reason and that too remained almost 2000 kilometers throughout the period.
According to pie chart, although cars were the most preferred mode of transportation during the period given, experiencing a significant fall of 5% and reached at 59% in 2010. However, a completely opposite trend was seen in case of truck, as it was one- fourth in 1990 before hitting a tremendous rise of 5% in later period. Next, buses and motorcycle fell by 1%, while other vehicles rose by 1% in 2010.
Overall, it is explicitly seen that, the major purpose of commute was trasport/ delivery, whereas cars were used the most to move from one place to another throughout the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 469, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1260.0 965.302439024 131% => OK
No of words: 254.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96062992126 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83019366039 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543307086614 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 283.868780488 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.9738823142 43.030603864 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.5 112.824112599 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.75 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120795623764 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567484381311 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560325036322 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0789120348285 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070547508243 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.4329268293 175% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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