The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.WRITING TASK 1You sh

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The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.WRITING TASK 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The climograph illustrates statistics of rainfall as well as temperature in the city of Kolkata in a single calendar year from Jan to Dec.

The most striking feature of this graph shows the maximum amount of rainfall was happened in the month of Jul and Aug, whereas the temperature remains constant below 30 deg. The highest rainfall recorded as 325mm in the month of Jul.

However, from Jan to May there was a gradual raising, where it was started from 20mm and reached 100mm in the month of May. In the month of Jul steep gain was registered in two consecutive months to reach a zenith with 325mm mark. After, Jul started falling the rainfall first, by 5mm then by 20 mm, in the month of Sep. it was around 300 mm.

From Sep to Nov, twice dipped with 150 mm and 125 mm respectively, recorded the lowest rainfall of 20mm in the month of Dec.

The Temperature was fluctuating throughout this year from Jan to May it was increasing, from 20 deg to almost 30 deg but then after started falling slowly till Dec where it was 20 deg.

Overall, Maximum rainfall in pick season which starts from Jun first week till Oct last.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... a single calendar year from Jan to Dec. The most striking feature of this gra...
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...perature remains constant below 30 deg. The highest rainfall recorded as 325mm in t...
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...l recorded as 325mm in the month of Jul. However, from Jan to May there was a...
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... month of Sep. it was around 300 mm. From Sep to Nov, twice dipped with 150 m...
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...st rainfall of 20mm in the month of Dec. The Temperature was fluctuating thro...
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...l of 20mm in the month of Dec. The Temperature was fluctuating throughout t...
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...slowly till Dec where it was 20 deg. Overall, Maximum rainfall in pick season...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, may, so, then, well, whereas, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51219512195 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43599812255 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521951219512 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1194227469 43.030603864 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132002693497 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632955476455 0.103423049105 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441979218144 0.0843802449381 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0800393103119 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494237585547 0.0819641961636 60% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.02 61.2550243902 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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