The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The given picture provides few fundamental steps which are involved in the production and ultimately the delivery of bricks. Clearly, it is visible that in fact it is a complex process which begins with collection of clay then putting it to diverse manuvering until it is transported to its destination for usage.
This whole process begins firstly by digging the ground to get clay by a digger. In the next step, this clay is placed over a sieve made of metalic grid above a roller which shifts it to the source of water and sand. After being mixed with these ingridients i.e. water and sand it is given a cubicle brick - like shape either by placing it mould or by wire cutter.Now the ray clay is in a proper shape of brick.
Next in the manufacturing process comes the drying and cooling steps. To get these cubicles dry they are placed for a period ranging from 24 - 48 hours in an oven, called drying oven. After one to two days these are shifted to a kiln, and first introduced to moderate temperature of 200 - 980C then to relatively higher temperatures upto 1300C before getting cooled down in a cooling chamber.
Lastly, they are arranged and packed on a pallet and shifted to a truck to be delivered.
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- The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'moulds'?
Suggestion: moulds
...brick - like shape either by placing it mould or by wire cutter.Now the ray clay is i...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Now
...r by placing it mould or by wire cutter.Now the ray clay is in a proper shape of br...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, so, then, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1000.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60829493088 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53787833559 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603686635945 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1997691453 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.111111111 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0645646768814 0.215688989381 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0290758691297 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031762363831 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0323068607879 0.15604864568 21% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0186766760181 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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