food consumption in the world, compared to China and India

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food consumption in the world, compared to China and India

The charts compare the proportion of different kinds of food consumed in the world and two countries namely China and India for the year 2008.

Overall, the world and both 2 countries consumed the largest proportion of Processed food and vegetables and fruits, while the opposite was true for Nuts and Seeds in the world as well as in India and Animal food in China.

The percentage of Processed food consumption in the world was 41%, which was slightly higher than that of China (34%) and India (39%). Vegetables and Fruits were the second most popular food in the world and in 2 nations. 29% of this kind of food was consumed in the world, compared to 32% of China and 23% of India.

Regarding the remaining categories, the figures for Animal food were relatively similar at around 26% of the world and India, much higher than 15% of China. In contrast, Nuts and Seeds were the least popular food in the world with only 4% used, but they were quite preferred in China and India, which accounted for 19% of China and 11% of India.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, second, well, while, in contrast, kind of, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 6.8 235% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 186.0 196.424390244 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58602150538 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29595073032 2.65546596893 86% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467741935484 0.547539520022 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.061409346 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.857142857 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5714285714 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 5.23603664747 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.582344253162 0.215688989381 270% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.308497186156 0.103423049105 298% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082793131549 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.384950790404 0.15604864568 247% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792387718365 0.0819641961636 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 61.2550243902 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.64 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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