The graph and table below show the changes in the number of overseas visitors and top 5 visitor countries to Britain in 2004 and 2005.
The information about the number of international visitors coming to the united kingdom and the top 5 of the tourists' origin nations are illustrated by the graphs.
Overall, it clear that the number of visitors in the UK was higher in 2004 and it reached the peaks at the end of the year. Besides, India entered the top 5 of the united kingdom's tourist origin in 2005.
The figure for people visiting the UK commenced at just above 600 in january 2004, falling by 200 in the next three-month. In June, almost 700 people travelled to Britain, and the figure slightly changed in September before it rose to about 800 at the end of the year. In contrast, from January to september 2005, the number of people touring to the united kingdom was lower compared to that of the previous year, and the highest number of britain’s tourist in 2005 was in December (just below 800).
In the meantime, the top 3 of Britain’s visitor origin countries stable, except for Japan dropping to second-place in 2005 with the -3% change in the tourist number. Also, by an increase of 13% in the figure of citizens visiting the UK, India entered the top 5 in 2005.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'tourists'' or 'tourist's'?
Suggestion: tourists'; tourist's
...the united kingdom and the top 5 of the tourists origin nations are illustrated by the g...
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Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'clears'?
Suggestion: clears
...strated by the graphs. Overall, it clear that the number of visitors in the UK w...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...05 was in December just below 800. In the meantime, the top 3 of Britain&apos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, second, so, except for, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67804878049 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62964384847 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482926829268 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3924261558 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.875 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300705600049 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132064440434 0.103423049105 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081075496134 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195440582808 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555673366026 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.