The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009.

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The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009.

The line graph illustrates changes in price of fresh fruits and vegetables, sugar and sweets, and carbonated drinks relatively, over a thirty-year period from 1979 to 2009.

Overall, it is clear that prices increased for four food product groups significantly. Only a rise in price of fresh fruits and vegetables is remarkably higher than the others.

In 1979, all the lines on the graph have the same figure in starting. There was a steady increasing in prices of sugar and sweets, carbonates drinks and consumer-price index between 1979 and 2009. Price of carbonated drinks increased to over 150, Which is the lowest price in this graph. Besides, price of sugar and sweets rose to 200. Although the prices of carbonated drinks and sugar and sweets were going up substantially, they were consistently below the consumer-price index in 2009.

There is a quickly growth in prices of fresh fruits and vegetables, particular in 2009. It rose to over 325 and were the highest change in four group.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('quickly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('growth') instead of another adjective.
...nsumer-price index in 2009. There is a quickly growth in prices of fresh fruits and vegetable...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 839.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05421686747 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83358663861 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512048192771 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9906567461 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.482577953429 0.215688989381 224% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1899611328 0.103423049105 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122240285995 0.0843802449381 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287850014887 0.15604864568 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10710262115 0.0819641961636 131% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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