The maps below show the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014.
Given are the 2 maps depicting the modifications of a sea-front residential area in Darwin during a 5-year period, commencing from 2009.
It is perceptible that this region experienced drastic modifications with the elimination of northern and southern industrial areas along with the addition of myriad buildings and facilities.
The south of the map, which in 2009 was diametrically occupied by an industrial area, 5 years later featured green space with trees, and the newly-added footpath running from west to east led to a harbour that was built in 2014. Meanwhile, the residential buildings in the middle were doubled in size together with the addition of the university building to their left.
The south of the map recorded the sustained alterations while the contrast was true for the north. The only transformation in this area was an extension of the exiguous swimming pool in the original place of the industrial area to the left of the lake. Both were encircled by a footpath leading to the eastern coast where two existing swimming pools were located. Meanwhile, the other amenities such as the convention center and the school positionally plateaued on a side of a T-junction road that led from west to the eastern fishing area.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 7, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Given are the 2 maps depicting the modifications ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1042.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 205.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08292682927 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95528444101 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590243902439 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2598978513 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.25 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.625 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13076362551 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561433884123 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506959521707 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084356914701 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429848866553 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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