The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
A description of the city hospital's scheme was illustrated in 2 the maps between the 2007 and 2010. it is generally visible that although the both schemes look like similar, but there were some changes during a 3-year period.
With respect to the first map related to the 2007, along to the hospital road in the south of the main building there were 6 bus stops from both sides. However, after 3 years in 2010 these bus stops were totally demolished and a new bus station in the western corner of the road was built. it seems the main goal of construction was to make the public transportation be more centralised and prevent congestion along the main road.
Subsequently, a public car park was settled nearby the hospital in the eastern corner.However, 3 years before the car park encompassed both public and staff parking spots altogether, making the entrance of the hospital to be overflowed. Dividing the car park into 2 independent fields maintained the free and easy entrance to the hospital from the eastern side and the bottom . Alternatively, 2 roundabouts in the juncture of the hospital road and city road were built letting the public and private cars move easily and avoid the traffic jam around the hospital.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. 73
- The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate at fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. 78
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The bar chart compares the amount of time spent by people in the UK on three different types of phone call between 1995 and 2002. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...n 2 the maps between the 2007 and 2010. it is generally visible that although the ...
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Line 5, column 291, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...e western corner of the road was built. it seems the main goal of construction was...
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Line 9, column 87, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...arby the hospital in the eastern corner.However, 3 years before the car park encompasse...
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Line 9, column 376, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...tal from the eastern side and the bottom . Alternatively, 2 roundabouts in the jun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, look, so, as to, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86666666667 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76350869393 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561904761905 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0446459198 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.75 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22316147237 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110917886814 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102471401225 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154801577289 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280079915972 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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