Dear Sir\Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with currently provided accommodation in a college hostel. I am sharing my room with Sneha Patel, who is two years junior to me. Although I do not have any personal issues with Sneha, it is becoming quite difficult for me to live with her.
I would like you to explain my issue in detail. I am studying in the final year, and most of the days need to attend early morning classes. Hence I need to wake up early and get ready for lectures; however, Sneha has a gym in the morning, and our morning routine clashes, which make me late almost every day. Also, Both of us do not share the exam dates on my exam day Sneha has a day off and plays loud music, which makes it difficult for me to concentrate.
I want to request you to please accommodate me with someone from my college year if possible so that I can concentrate on my study and prepare well for the upcoming exam.
Yours faithfully,
Aditya Arora
Dear Sir\Madam,
I am writing this letter to expressed my dissatisfaction with currently provided accommodation in a college hostel. I am sharing my room with Sneha Patel, who is two years junior then me. Although I do not have any personal issues with Sneha, it is becoming quite difficult for me to live with her.
I would like you to explain my issue in detail. I am studying in final year and most of the days I need to attend early morning classes. Hence I need to wake up early and get ready for lectures; however, Sneha has gym in the morning and our morning routine clashes which makes me late almost everyday. Also, Both of us do not share the exam dates, on my exam day she has day off and during that time she plays loud music which makes difficult for me to concentrate.
I want to request you to please accommodate me with someone from my college year if possible so that I can concentrate on my study and prepare well for upcoming exam.
Yours faithfully,
Aditya Arora
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...I need to attend early morning classes. Hence I need to wake up early and get ready f...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...tine clashes which makes me late almost everyday. Also, Both of us do not share the exam...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...prepare well for upcoming exam. Yours faithfully, Aditya Arora
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50828729282 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5616658258 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657458563536 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.8421493749 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209056805907 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856136733627 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0640378448042 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146807946362 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714285459642 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.