Write a letter of invitation to your parents. In your letter,
- Explain that you have completed your studies.
- Give details of the event including time, date, and dress code.
- Let them know how many tickets they have and who they are for.
My dear parents,
I am feeling very excited and delighted while writing this letter to you. I have just finished my tertiary education and there is a convocation ceremony at my university, I am inviting you to join me in my graduation celebration.
It was my dream to study in one of the reputed universities in Canada, and recently I received my Master of Mechanical Engineering degree certificate from the university. The event is going to take place in the Henry auditorium on Friday of 26th January 2021. All my friend group has decided that we would invite our parents to Traditional Indian outfits to express our culture in Canada.
I have got three tickets from the event organizer, so I would like you to ask my girlfriend to join you for the event we have been waiting for a long time. It would be nice to see her in front of me for many days.
Thanks for joining me and let me know for further information.
Your youngest son,
Amit Savaliya
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62790697674 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73330024559 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656976744186 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5739820336 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4444444444 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.44444444444 4.34317383033 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202655388036 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769247999206 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526264054915 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108143217678 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513462229328 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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