Dear Sam,
I hope you did well on your English mock test. Don't forget to register for the final exams before this weekend, as otherwise, you will not be able to pick your preferred exam slot.
I wanted to inform you that this Friday I am planning to throw a surprise birthday party to George at my residence. The purpose of this celebration is to make him feel home and joyful, as I could always sense a hint of melancholy in his gestures. Moreover, let us make him grow happiness within and around him and truly, parties like this help him to overcome his personal troubles.
Some of the arrangements for the party has already been done, like ordering cake, balloons and musics. However, I really wonder what type of present he would like to have. Hence, we don't have enough time to discuss and decide, you bring some interest Historical Novels from your book store to gift him as he is an avid reader of the past stories he will be more enthusiastic to have them.
Bye for now. Get back to me as soon as you can.
With love,
Akil
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 48, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...you did well on your English mock test. Dont forget to register for the final exams ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...m to overcome his personal troubles. Some of the arrangements for the party has already ...
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Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...resent he would like to have. Hence, we dont have enough time to discuss and decide,...
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Line 7, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... have enough time to discuss and decide, you bring some interest Historical Novel...
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Line 11, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to me as soon as you can. With love, Akil
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47395833333 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29993182832 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6875 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9860608271 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0909090909 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4545454545 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194841441189 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677263454348 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04991718087 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108529560914 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341473028756 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.