YOU HAVE A FULL-TIME JOB AND ARE ALSO DOING A PART TIME EVENING COURSE. YOU NOW FIND THAT YOU CANNOT CONTINUE THE COURSE.
WRITE A LETTER TO YOUR TUTOR. IN YOU LETTER:
• describe the situation
• explain why you cannot continue at this time
• say what action you would like to take
Dear Sir,
I am writing in reference to inform you that I will not be able to continue my part-time course due to work exigencies. Let me explain the situation in detail.
To elucidate recently my reporting manager has resigned on short notice, therefore, the company management has decided to pass on his work responsibilities as they are not able to find a suitable replacement in the stipulated time period. Although it indirectly means I am promoted, however, on the other hand, it also means additional work responsibilities and more travel. Lately, I have missed many classes due to my travel to client locations for business meetings, therefore, I feel that I wouldn't be able to continue this course anymore.
Lastly, I would request you allow me some time off from the course so that I can dedicate some time to cover duties at my office however if this option is not possible then I would request you to partially refund my tuition fee.
I look forward to your response and resolution.
Yours sincerely
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing in reference to inform you ...
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Line 4, column 496, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ness meetings, therefore, I feel that I wouldnt be able to continue this course anymore...
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Line 8, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...esponse and resolution. Yours sincerely Said
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, lastly, look, so, then, therefore, i feel, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88571428571 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89605502259 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651428571429 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.6161561004 44.8134815571 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.875 76.5299724578 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 4.34317383033 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220656500054 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792561327085 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677166816347 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126936992291 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808321840779 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 70.7449484536 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.