You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course.
Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter
describe the situation
explain why you cannot continue at this time
say what action you would like to take
Dear Sir,
I have enrolled in your “English communication” course last month. Unfortunately, due to my present work commitments, I am unable to complete the course. I am writing to inform you that I would not be able to attend my classes from now onward.
I am working as a Sales Executive in Alpha Co. Ltd. I am responsible to handle the contracts and budgeting matter of different projects in the company. In addition, I have to liaison with my several customers through meetings with them. I usually stay back after office hours to execute the task assigned and to meet the deadlines of projects.
I am having difficulties to continue my course further since recently my company got a new project which has increased my workload. For this reason, I often got late for my classes in your institute and so sometimes tired enough to fully concentrate on the lectures.
Taking above considerations into account, I would like you to cancel my registration for this session and allow me to take the classes in your next available batch.
I look forward to hearing you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Sara Batool
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... as a Sales Executive in Alpha Co. Ltd. I am responsible to handle the contracts ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to fully concentrate on the lectures. Taking above considerations into account...
^^^
Line 12, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o hearing you soon. Yours faithfully, Sara Batool
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94736842105 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05555214192 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663157894737 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1673034881 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3333333333 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160173061244 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578996600554 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582229137376 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102656058681 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642384346585 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.