You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.
Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:
• Introduce yourself.
• Explain that you did not buy the items listed.
• Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.
You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in regards to a number of mysterious expensive purchases identified from my latest credit card statement.
I would begin by introducing myself. My name is Adriane Ho and I hold a number of credit cards issued by your bank. The credit card in question is 1234 7786 2233 9918, where this is a newly issued credit card and I have only activated it on the 1st of June, 2019.
The latest bill showed number of high value transactions occurred on 28th May and 29th May 2019, prior to the activation of the card. These purchases could not been acquired by me as I have not received the credit card.
In view of the above, could you please void the transactions and to provide with an update credit invoice. Further, it is much appreciated my current card is to be suspended and replacement be issued.
Thank you for your kind assistance in advance.
Yours faithfully
Adriane Ho
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in regards to a number of m...
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Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: IN_REGARD_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'regarding' or 'with regard to'.
Suggestion: regarding; with regard to
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing in regards to a number of mysterious expensive purcha...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 253, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'June 2019'.
Suggestion: June 2019
... I have only activated it on the 1st of June, 2019. The latest bill showed number of h...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 765.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69325153374 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59155802242 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 127.690721649 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61963190184 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 222.3 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7216158815 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 4.34317383033 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26022481313 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930632063647 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540428886271 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137090763194 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341844175027 0.0580467560999 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.