You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you about the feedback that I received from my staff about the hotel. We had conducted an all-day company meeting at your hotel on behalf of Genpact on 17th October.
Employees were quite amazed by the high-speed internet service as well as the ambiance of your hotel. However, I have received a couple of complaints regarding the food. Most of the guests were not happy with the food served, as it was undercooked and not enough hot. Moreover, there were not many varieties available for the non-vegetarians.
Would you kindly take steps to improve your kitchen and encourage the chef to prepare more local food varieties? Overall, we were quite happy with the hospitality, we are looking forward to organizing more events with you once the food issue is sorted.
Thank you for your consideration. I hope my feedback will help you be better prepared in the future.
Yours faithfully,
John David
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, moreover, regarding, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88819875776 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67683848884 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683229813665 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3488219413 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5454545455 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6363636364 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298972416023 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101035649525 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645594535416 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169574956856 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776062763902 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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