You recently used a taxi and left some important documents there. Write a letter to the taxi manager and say:
– Describe what you left and where it happened.
– Why are these papers important?
– What would you like the manager to do about it?
Dear sir,
I am writing to draw your attention to the belongings I left in one of your cab "The victoria lanes" yesterday 2/02/2021 and I need your help to know about their whereabouts immediately and send it to my address given below.
I had travelled from Manchester to East london via your taxi service. I embarked my journey from Manchester station to Walthamstow in a black coloured Prius number plate is XS20147. I had held a suitcase and a hand bag with a driver named Khursheed. When I left the cab at Walthamstow station I have realized my hand bag was missing. I tried to call the driver, but unfortunately he didn't respond.
On my way to the hotel, I have received a phone call and the driver has told me that he has found a handbag mentioned with my demographics on the documents inside. Those files are high-profile documents because they are my official project documents. they contain the patient data used in research and confidential too. Now you can realize how impactful they are for me?
As the driver has found them I just need you to send me on my address so that I can resume my research work. I am looking forward to hearing from you. if you need my help please call me back on a given number and I would happily pay its delivery charges. I would highly appreciate your efforts if you could send my handbag with my belongings as soon as possible.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...r to East london via your taxi service. I embarked my journey from Manchester sta...
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Line 5, column 183, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...coloured Prius number plate is XS20147. I had held a suitcase and a hand bag with...
^
Line 5, column 251, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hand bag with a driver named Khursheed. When I left the cab at Walthamstow station I...
^^^^
Line 5, column 384, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...o call the driver, but unfortunately he didnt respond. On my way to the hotel, I ha...
^^^^^
Line 6, column 252, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...they are my official project documents. they contain the patient data used in resear...
^^^^
Line 7, column 151, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...am looking forward to hearing from you. if you need my help please call me back on...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 32.9175257732 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1162.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 254.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57480314961 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74038373579 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570866141732 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 351.0 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8126247533 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4666666667 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9333333333 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114292367805 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040458372303 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330598165038 0.0603063233224 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0677102377879 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320863204879 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.