More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine.
Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world.
Discuss both opinions and give your opinion.
In recent times there has been much debate about emigrating qualified people. One particular issue is whether this is natural process. Some people thin this is inapropriate for country. I do really think this is a difficult question, but I partly agree that this is a great choice for people and in this essay I will support my opinion.
One major argument is the fact that rich countries offer bigger salaries for outstanding workers in spite of the fact they are at high economical level. By way of illustration, such countries as France or Germany are the most appealing for people. In other words, it is the best way to earn good money rather than working in hometown. I would emphasize that this is a great oppurtunity fo people's targets. Second and realted argument is that employers have excellent way to gain experience and improve their skills into their particular and related field. For instance, in rich countries like in USA science and educational system are widely spread and well educated. It is evident that if people will move to richer countries it might well help to improve their skills. Although I think it is a great experience working abroad.
There is also, however, significant counter-argument that educational and economical level of country will dicrease if well educatede people will leave poor countries. To illustrate this point, if the number of qualified and smart people will fall it will affect the country's future dramatically. In addition in such fields as medical, science and so on. To my mind it will recall in the future and affect it in a negative way.
In conclusion, although it is a common belief that leaving your country is the worst. My peronal point of view there is no clear answer to this question. My belief though is that working as a foreigner is a great opportunity to get experience and achieve your goals.
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whether this is natural process.
whether this is a natural process.
rich countries offer bigger salaries for outstanding workers in spite of the fact they are at high economical level.
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are the most appealing for people.
are the most appealing ones for people.
Sentence: Some people thin this is inapropriate for country.
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Sentence: I would emphasize that this is a great oppurtunity fo people's targets.
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Sentence: Second and realted argument is that employers have excellent way to gain experience and improve their skills into their particular and related field.
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Sentence: There is also, however, significant counter-argument that educational and economical level of country will dicrease if well educatede people will leave poor countries.
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Sentence: My peronal point of view there is no clear answer to this question.
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