1. Some people think watching TV is bad for children, while others think that watching TV has more beneficial effects on children. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is often argued that watching television exerts pernicious impacts upon youngsters. In my opinion, however, I strongly believe that the advantages of watching television far outweigh the disadvantages.
On the one hand, it cannot be denied that watching TV has some negative consequences. Firstly, watching TV too long is detrimental for children’s health. To be more specific, it can lead to such problems as: fatigue, eye strain and obesity. Secondly, some programs even include sexual and violent images which are inappropriate for adolescents to watch. Exposure to such kinds of contents on the screen can put them at a higher risk of copying the behavior. Finally, advertisers direct their marketing at children so they are more likely to put their parents under pressure to buy useless commodity on TV.
On the other hand, I think that TV plays a vital role in children development. In fact, it is one of the favorite ways to wind down after a hard day at school, which helps a lot in escaping from stress and resulting in higher efficiency at schools. Furthermore, watching different kinds of shows broadens youngsters’ horizons and provides them with limitless knowledge in reality life. For instance, Planet Earth and Discovery Channel not only take the viewers into unknown natural habitats which are home to various flora and fauna but also educate them about the importance of preserving the wonders of the Earth.
In conclusion, although many people think that watching TV is harmful ,I personally reckon that it brings more benefits to children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18823529412 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93439741631 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654901960784 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5732921807 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.769230769 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5384615385 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318368800702 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111800272196 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10187762591 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19228909519 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879732190003 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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