Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now one big traffic jam.
how true do you think this statement is?
what measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars
Currently, when the overpopulation becomes more and more awful while the living level is updated day by day which results to a big global problem named " traffic jam". Someone said that due to the rapid increase of cars, many city in the world are now "big traffic jam". In my opinion, this statement is true according to my personal observation.
First of all, when living standard was enhanced, people have more and more abilibties to purchase car because of both daily need and need of respectation. The speed of purchasing was too fast That the government hardly keep up in repairing and extending the infracstructure especially the street then it becomes easy for traffic to take place and become worse. Secondly, about the car ownership attitude, many people do not obey to traffic rules, daily news always announce about a lot of situation that cars runs in motobike land which is very small that happens traffic jam. Nowadays global government has brought so many measure aimed to discourage people from using cars and persude them to use public transportation instead such as making poster about enviroment pollution or using public vehicle for saving budget,... Fortunately, those measures carry out effectively and cars using number has gradually declined.
In the conclusion, over the past thirdty year car ownership has grown up so rapidly that do make cities in the world become a giant traffic jam. Anyway, thanks to the government effort, that problem may become no more risk in the the future.
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- In the twentieth century contact between different parts of the world has developed rapidly thanks to air travel and telecommunications Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 78
- Pollution of rivers lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment What are the possible causes of water pollution and what ef ects does this have on animal life and human society 84
- A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree 11
- Many governments have laws that ban the sale and use of hard drugs such as heroin and cocaine yet they allow people to buy drugs such as tobacco and alcohol Laws that prohibit the sale and use of hard drugs should be applied to all drugs including tobacco 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 480, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun situation seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of situations'.
Suggestion: a lot of situations
...rules, daily news always announce about a lot of situation that cars runs in motobike land which i...
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Line 2, column 619, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun measure seems to be countable; consider using: 'many measures'.
Suggestion: many measures
...wadays global government has brought so many measure aimed to discourage people from using c...
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Line 2, column 819, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...r using public vehicle for saving budget,... Fortunately, those measures carry out...
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Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...that problem may become no more risk in the the future.
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Line 3, column 226, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...that problem may become no more risk in the the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, first, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, while, as to, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1281.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70056811675 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623015873016 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.9735390893 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.1 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374264244969 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132010924974 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095125695071 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230927868005 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395928238909 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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