Crime rate, in most countries, is often higher in urban areas than in rural areas.Why do you think that is?What can be done to reduce the crime rate?
Crime has always been a heated and problematic issue to every country in the world, capturing an inordinate amount of attention of the public. In recent years, some studies conducted the escalating crime rate in matropolitan is asserted to have higher tendency than in the countryside. In this essay, it is worthwhile to examine some of the main causes and suggest some plausible solutions.
We may point out an indisputable fact that the first cause of high crime rate in urban area is the high divergence in ethnical terms which sometimes accidentally lead to the lack of mutual understanding and empathy towards others compared to rural areas where prodominantly lived by inhabitants. Alternatively, by the decrepancy in customs .belief,culture, the conflicts would certainly transpire as a tool for a person to commit a crime, no matter whether it was done deliberately or randomly. Moreover,considering the job in the city are scare these days,the jobseekers and applicants are not only required to have formal academic qualifications and related-job skill but also are mischevious and single-minded to be able to get the job and promotion. As being alive in the arduous and competitive working environment constitute difficult, people are very often confronted with the descrimination, ostracism or even jealousy of their counterparts due to their oustanding talent or different custom,for instance,those people,who are likely susceptible by these parameters would undoubtedly collaspe and be unempoyee.Not surprisingly, the prospect of being offenders, with inducement is aming substain themselves and their family is accomprehensible. The main final factors is the over usage of prohibited drugs and alcohols, especially with the major purpose of escaping from repetitive world or simply just for fun. There is no denying that, these alcohol would have deteriotating impact on action of the alcoholic, triggering them to be perpetually in unconcious psychology and utilize the acts of violence by distorting their temperament, utimately being criminals is the ramification for them.
To addressing with the crime, the authority must evaluate the rationales elaborately to establish the possible solutions. With their dominance, the goverment could possibly capitalise on social medias such as news paper, TV, radio, through out the country, disseminating about the threat of crime and teach citizens self- defence techniques. Another methods relies on the combination of imposing tougher laws and traing a more effective police force. Not only does it penalise the offenders but also deters the prospective criminals. Besides, more interventions such as lauching anti-social campaign, creating more educational programs,assisting people to have the assess and comprehend perspective about crimes must more proliferate publicly. On top of that, for individuals citizens, crimes sometimes could be nipped in the bud if they were more viligant and brave enough to fight back or at least report the police on a crime, may be there would be more victims. Sometimes, crimes are pampered by people’s cowardice and negligence. Peole must be awear of their responsiblity to the whole society rather than avoid it.
In summary, the aboved-mention fact give one a glimpse of the causes of distarity between rural and urban areas in the domain of crime rate and some suggestions to deal with. Joint endeavour by the authority and individuals citizens are highly requested to reduce the amount of criminals to hold the ethics in the community.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, while, at least, for instance, in summary, such as, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 13.1623246493 213% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 10.4138276553 259% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 41.998997996 188% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3003.0 1615.20841683 186% => OK
No of words: 546.0 315.596192385 173% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83390555256 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.30123264355 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 319.0 176.041082164 181% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584249084249 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 973.8 506.74238477 192% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.9483441225 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.052631579 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.7368421053 20.7667163134 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 26.0 5.01903807615 518% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229779017703 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625914093213 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576041924371 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138427277111 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.015392813431 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 185.0 78.4519038076 236% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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