Cyclists and car drivers today share the same road cause some problems. What are the problems? What can be done do to reduce these problems?
Nowadays, the usage of the same road by cyclists and motorists is increasingly popular. Although there will undoubtedly be some negative consequences of this trend, solutions can be taken to mitigate these potential problems.
There are a number of problems related to make use of the same road. As we can see that cyclists using the same street with car drivers are more likely to put their safety in danger. For example, people who use bicycle could probably have unexpected accidents which can cause by car drivers. In addition to this, without separate cycle lane, cyclists could change to use private vehicles such as car to commute daily, which could guarantee their safety. This means that a huge amount of carbon dioxide, gas and toxic emissions that are produced from cars are released into the atmosphere, which is responsible for environmental pollution.
However, various measures can take steps to tackle the problems mentioned above. Firstly, government should alter roadways and built separate bike lane for cyclists in order to secure their safety while driving, which encourage them to use bicycle more often. Secondly, government should enhance people awareness of the benefits of driving bicycle as well. When they are fully aware of this, they could ride their bicycle as primary means of transport to travel. This not only assists them to improve physical health but also helps reduce environmental pollution because a large number private transport on the road could be reduced.
In conclusion, governments should take actions to address problems caused by sharing the same street.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s related to make use of the same road. As we can see that cyclists using the same...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26070038911 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5684824608 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614785992218 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8434958416 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.0 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242264566168 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913422361152 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732688060625 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161995190609 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046092748806 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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