With the development of technology children are now living a world that is completely different to the past. What problems does this cause for society and family?
It seems likely that flourishment in modern technology results that the younglings currently are deeming to live in a distinct world in comparison to past. Plethora of troubles are created among the community and family. The following essay would justify my perspective.
The most common effect of this trend is less attraction among the society because in these days younglings are busy in their own electronic gadgets such as computer, video game, so that is why they do not have knowledge about their neighbors and society members. For example ,on same special occasions they do not show interest in conversating with each other and siblings. Therefore, the attraction of children among society is least.
The other prominent obstacle of this trend is that weak bonding within family because teenagers do not show interest to talk with their family. They are sitting alone in room and use only mobile phones which is harmful for relationship with family . For example, they do not spent time with their parents and lack of face to face interaction. So they do not have enough knowledge about family needs and work .
To conclude, although, with the development of technology many benefits are available for children and people, there are many harmful effects on society and family .
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ny harmful effects on society and family .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15238095238 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63497835566 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580952380952 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8608579462 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3636363636 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239542259656 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845258016054 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658880338723 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14806477956 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562027138688 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 275, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ighbors and society members. For example ,on same special occasions they do not sh...
^^
Line 5, column 249, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... is harmful for relationship with family . For example, they do not spent time wit...
^^
Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...gh knowledge about family needs and work . To conclude, although, with the deve...
^^
Line 7, column 164, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ny harmful effects on society and family .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15238095238 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63497835566 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580952380952 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8608579462 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3636363636 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239542259656 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845258016054 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658880338723 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14806477956 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562027138688 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.