Drug abuse is becoming more and more common in many countries. What are some of the problems associated with drug abuse, and what are some of the possible solutions?
Up to nows, drug abuse has become a contentious phenomenon in many developing countries. This trend is bound to cause so many thorny problems to social life and economic development in many countries.
As can be seen, nowadays, some adolescents and adults use stimulants as a form of entertainment for themselves. For that reason, it becomes one of the main problem cause criminal problems in society, that lead to the development of countries. For example, there exist so many robberies and murders which causing to people's life and work, hence the development of the economy in many countries. The use of stimulants costs a lot of money, leading to uncontrolled addiction problems that cause robbery and even murders. Therefore, societies become less secure, so it due to make people feel threatened and worry when they have to prevent theft. Besides, drug addictive also causes health problems, which lead to an increase in disease and make budget stagnation.
Notwithstanding, every problem has solutions of their own and governments could perform to mitigate the aforementioned issues. First, a possible solution is to increase the awareness of the cause of the harm by stimulants by giving lectures at schools and organizing drug abuse prevention events. Second, governments could introduce laws to deter and limit their widespread use, thereby reducing the amount of use and trade. Finally, people should encourage individuals to detoxify and help them reintegrate into society, thus creating motivation for other individuals.
In conclusion, there is a wide range of solutions for drug abuse, and it can be used to prevent and reform stimulant addiction.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, hence, if, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99249136864 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.1125597665 49.4020404114 39% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.307692308 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3076923077 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209275539341 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772191329024 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061672345223 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135736046204 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451607266436 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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