In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people believe that people will not buy any printed newspapers or books becauses of the convenience of online reading. I think it is true that fewer people will pay for the paper books in the future, but the consumption to them will not disappear.
It is admitted that with the development of technology, online reading becomes more and more convenient and popular. People can have access to thousands of books in all kinds of areas without the limit of time and location. For example, you can find a book written by an Japanese scholar 50 years ago just within several minutes. And online reading also make it possible to know the international and domestic news in a very short time. You don't need to wait until the next day to read the newspaper, in contrast, news websites will update the latest news immediately after something happens.
However, Printed newspapers and books have their irreplaceable characteristics and special reasons to exist. Firstly, some old people are not familiar with electronic products and don't get used to them. They prefer to get news from newspapers and read paper books. Secondly, not every person in the world can have his or her own computer or mobile phone. In many countries, computers and mobile phones are not common things. People living in those countries can only buy printed newspapers and books to know the news and study. Finally, some people like the texture of paper books and like to collect them. They prefer the feeling of reading a real book rather than reading online, and they are willing to pay for their reading habits.
In conclusion, although convenient online reading will reduce the consumption of printed nespapers and books, there will still be people who are willing to buy and read them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, still, for example, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89632107023 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52507253757 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531772575251 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.4082266914 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.5 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.375 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315179699472 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100363151876 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828676073862 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213039177244 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.047090114712 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.