Homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world.What do you think are the main causes of this problems and what measures could be taken to solve it?
In this day and age, the more the world develops, the more people who have nowhere to live are rising in some major cities. This essay examines the likely causes and the imaginative solutions to resolve this issue.
There are several reasons which lead to the sharply growing of the homelessness in recent years. However, the cost of accommodation is the controversial cause.
Because of the strict demand for jobs, many people have lost their jobs so that they cannot afford to rent their own private house. Moreover, there is a significant increase in population that requires more places to live in. Therefore, the rent for houses is becoming higher and higher than in the past. For example, a person who is low-income might not pay the higher fees of a house in many major cities.
To tackle this burning problem, it is offered that the government should build some affordable housing in order to help people who are in the verge of being homlessness and destitute people. This means they build a range of flats or community houses. Such a measure not only saves more land to do other work but also be economical . Another effective solution is to create an incentive policy in some rural areas. For instance, the government revitalizes traditional jobs in the countryside and provides accommodation for homelessness come and work there. In addition, this measure would solve another problem which is unemployment.
In conclusion, the considerable increase in homelessness is caused by the higher cost of living. Then, affordable housing and creating more jobs in the countryside are considered as an effective solution. I totally believe that building a house which can be affordable by destitute people might be the best solution to deal with this controversial issue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07482993197 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80374846557 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544217687075 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.1489247348 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7647058824 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2941176471 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35294117647 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178734368726 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561492047813 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047750315891 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0922877150326 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448224226825 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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