Homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world.What do you think are the main causes of this problems and what measures could be taken to solve it?
Even though infrastructures and economics have seen considerable developments over the past decades, homelessness is still a burning issue in many major urban areas. This essay will discuss why the number of the homelessness has been increasing and provide some probable solutions to tackle this situation.
There are numerous reasons for that problem. Firstly, one of main causes is that some people cannot afford their own accommodation. Due to overpopulation which is happening in many megacities, the demand for places to live is becoming a crisis. Consequently, the landowners raise the leasing price to gain more profit, leading to those without homes because of rising rent fees. Another reason is the shortage of land to build cheap homes. Facilitises such as factories shopping malls have grabbed a greater number of land.As a result, not much land is available to provide affordable homes for citizens.
To minimize this problem, a potential solution can be considered is that the government should subsidise accomodation for people by providing cheaper homes for poor people. In addition, authorities can build some charitable homes for the poor to stay overnight. Secondly, building more blocks with flats is likely an effective view . In HCM City, for instance, the government has taken advantage of spare space to build blocks with apartments, leading to not only increased households but it also saves time and money for many families. Finally, the best strategy is revitalizing the economies as well as infrastructures in rural areas. If the rural areas receive good care from the government, there is no longer migration to inner cities. Hence, the homelessness will be alleviated with ease.
To conclude, homelessness is considered as a growing concern owing to the cost of houses and lack of land. I personally believe that improving the standard of life in the countryside might be the best solution to handle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28387096774 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98275492722 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625806451613 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.886926114 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3529411765 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2352941176 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.11764705882 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14037298955 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414657677117 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039328007621 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895780375432 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314404809201 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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