The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
In the past many people are tend to have a single career; now, however people willing to having several jobs or ways of making money also continuing their studies for broader their view. This essay will discuss both sides of view.
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Having a single career enables people to have a stable income. When you are a full-time employee, your salaries most likely paid monthly. Having a stable income allows people to save money by following their own plan. Those who have a single job tend to following regular schedule. It is commonplace for people to do something regularly, which causes some people only having one job instead of having several careers.
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However, nowadays having several jobs has become popular. Having several jobs allows people to experience different environment. People find it difficult to know their interest. Also, continuing studies allows people to gain their qualification being more competitive. Many people choose to have part-time job and take a part-time degree because they are preparing to change their job or gain knowledge.
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To sum up, both ways are beneficial for people to improve their work experience but not suitable for everyone. People need to find their own ways because everyone are different and have different personality. Therefore, the most important thing is to find your intertest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 307, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...e. Many people choose to have part-time job and take a part-time degree because the...
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Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to change their job or gain knowledge. - To sum up, both ways are beneficial f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1127.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24186046512 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58663945003 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558139534884 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 356.4 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8408362604 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.1333333333 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216043423783 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863441115765 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748671936124 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147029379429 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647212846461 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.52 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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