Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity.
What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity?
What solutions can you suggest?
Despite of knowing the importance of the world's ecosystem, People's activity is the main cause of demolishing of various species. This eassy will examine the main causes of loss of bio-diversity and the possible solutions to this problem.
The two vital reasons are change of natural habitats and the overexploitation of organic resources. When we cut the tree for building our houses by wood and use the lap of concrete on the soil for making roads. Which leads the problem to loss it's natural habits. Morover, Using the resources again and again without maintain the rules of break for a certain period of time makes it exhausted. For instance, Do not give the enough time to fish for growing up also the reason of less availability of its.
Some possible solution can be discussed according these issues. like, If we want to get rid of this problem the judiciary should introduce a new law and which should be followed strictly to prevent untouched rersources. Fathermore, We should aware our people by awonuncing to save it with a proper manare. we should make theme more concern. This is how we will be able to protect our species and save us from the threat of losing bio diversity. this way people will be more conscious of the environment and will not overuse or destroy its resources.
To conclude, People are the liable for the causes of loss of bio diversity by their activities. However, We can protect our species by announcing into people about social awareness. otherwise, The government has to apply new law or regulation tightly to prevent this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...espite of knowing the importance of the worlds ecosystem, Peoples activity is the main...
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Line 3, column 212, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... concrete on the soil for making roads. Which leads the problem to loss its natural h...
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Line 3, column 359, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...intain the rules of break for a certain period of time makes it exhausted. For instance, Do no...
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Line 6, column 65, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Like
...an be discussed according these issues. like, If we want to get rid of this problem ...
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Line 6, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e, If we want to get rid of this problem the judiciary should introduce a new law...
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Line 6, column 308, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...uncing to save it with a proper manare. we should make theme more concern. This is...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...rom the threat of losing bio diversity. this way people will be more conscious of th...
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Line 8, column 183, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Otherwise
...ing into people about social awareness. otherwise, The government has to apply new law or...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87732342007 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6984699672 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576208178439 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0882278594 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.0 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181149150451 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630355391271 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815914949452 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128802792254 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0783601246899 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.