Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.
To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?
It is argued by some that many living aspects has been changed because of Information technology and leisure, work activities and our home are now dominated. In my opinion, I do believe the benefits of computerized information outweigh the drawbacks of it.
On the one hand, there are many adverse circumstances while using IT. Firs of all, if users want to use data processing, they have to had their devices connected to the Internet. This means their house, their work place always have wi-fi and Bluetooth; as a result, it would bring many physical problems such as headache, especially for men in decrease the quality of sperm while being too close at the Wi-fi router or simply their own devices connected to wi-fi where ever they go, at work or home. Furthermore, children today keep playing computer games at home with their worldwide friends and this leads to other serious problems. Their teenagers could got scammed by strangers or just simply instead of doing outdoor activities, they play with their video games connected to the Internet for all the times then those youth could get obesity.
On the other hand, I can see many advantages that computerized information brings to people. Firstly, IT technology brings people stick together. For example, a family member who living abroad can call to their parents using video call in order to see each other and share their moments. To people who is working, they can have a meeting on video calling application in some unpredictable situations. Secondly, IT helps people enjoying their life more than before. For instance, online storage is a great tool to store information, data such as keeping photos , sharing moment to others. In addition, information technology also allows users to watch many entertaining programs that they could not see like in their country.
In conclusion, I hang on a notion that using computerized information have many adverse effects such as obesity and fertility, yet the the benefits outweigh the disadvantages of it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 816, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this youth' or 'those youths'?
Suggestion: this youth; those youths
... to the Internet for all the times then those youth could get obesity. On the other hand,...
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Line 3, column 560, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...information, data such as keeping photos , sharing moment to others. In addition, ...
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Line 4, column 132, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ects such as obesity and fertility, yet the the benefits outweigh the disadvantages of ...
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Line 4, column 132, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ects such as obesity and fertility, yet the the benefits outweigh the disadvantages of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07831325301 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72817162178 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578313253012 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.1444207554 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.4 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22815240693 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860867772101 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12282388709 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205530076145 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.185320627438 0.056905535591 326% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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