It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should only focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people think that helping all low-class people all around the world is impossible thought for governments. I completely disagree with this view as besides being aware of their home the governments should give distributions to help people in other countries.
One of the reasons is that I believe that providing international aids to support needy overseas people is doable. Today, with the transport development, it enables government agencies to quickly provide their support to relatively remote corners of the world. The governments have done lots of actions aiming to alleviate suffering and saved lives. Given a demonstration is the tsunami in Japan, the governments around the world responded immediately to supply food, tents arrived by air along with medical staffs and vaccines so as to help tens of thousands of people who suffered from the disaster.
Another reason is that, as my concern, supporting those who lack the basic needs of life could be our moral responsibilities. No matter where they live or geographical boundaries and the governments should recognise their international obligations. Despite the fact that depending on supportive things from charities and international relief organisations such as Red Cross and UNICEF do not usually cover all misfortune people. Therefore, the governments not only assist a part of their budget but must also provide expenses for international aid bodies. Finally, sharing a common humanity is what we could do to distribute the assistance, helping to ignore the suffering of no individual in the world.
In conclusion, although I agree that the governments must tackle urgent issues at home, they should have the means and moral responsibility to fulfil their international obligations to what people need help.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... along with medical staffs and vaccines so as to help tens of thousands of people who su...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'finally', 'if', 'so', 'therefore', 'as to', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.262458471761 0.247107183377 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.159468438538 0.155533422707 103% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0764119601329 0.0946595960268 81% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0431893687708 0.0501214627716 86% => OK
Pronouns: 0.046511627907 0.0437548338989 106% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126245847176 0.122226691241 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0332225913621 0.0403226058552 82% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.10387469033 2.80594681477 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0365448504983 0.0326793684256 112% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.102990033223 0.0861772015684 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0232558139535 0.021408717616 109% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0166112956811 0.011925033212 139% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1785.0 1933.35771543 92% => OK
No of words: 278.0 316.048096192 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.42086330935 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.413669064748 0.374742101984 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.294964028777 0.28420135186 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.208633093525 0.203846283523 102% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.172661870504 0.137316102897 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10387469033 2.80594681477 111% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.037074148 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625899280576 0.56093040696 112% => OK
Word variations: 70.3657872826 60.7387585426 116% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 23.1666666667 20.7743622355 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6548170945 49.517814964 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.75 127.492653851 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7743622355 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.833333333333 0.814263465372 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 52.6630695444 49.1944974215 107% => OK
Elegance: 1.69333333333 1.69124875643 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.444236923017 0.332605444948 134% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0837168720208 0.102741220458 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0398567311581 0.0668466124924 60% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.58837508086 0.534860350844 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162099348016 0.148594505496 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180690951427 0.134430193775 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887425591321 0.0742795772207 119% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.370509299401 0.324371583561 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0496022611476 0.0638462369009 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.317731487147 0.228012699653 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546070800688 0.058150111329 94% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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