It is true that each country need to have rules and laws that all citizens must comply. Some people argue that residents should be allowed to be free to do whatever they want, I strongly believe that legislation is essential to ensure social safety.
To begin with, rules and laws are dispensable because without them, a community or a larger scale, a nation could be faced with several problems. In terms of crime, the number of criminals would be reduced thanks to strict punishment. A murder, for example, could receive capital punishment or even the death penalty in some countries. If laws and rules are not insufficient strict, there will be more likely to have more law violators. From the perspective of transportation, some regulations such as wearing a helmet when driving a motorbike or commuters must stop when a traffic light turns red are significantly crucial to alleviate traffic congestion or accidents. These rules and laws not only no means to contradict human rights, but also enable people to freely act and behave within a common standard.
Besides, legislation should be appropriate to ensure citizens' legal rights. Firstly, rules should be equal for both genders. Take traditional Vietnamese regulations as an example. Regarding education, It was such an absurd law that all girls were not accepted in any school while boys were encouraged to attend higher education. Secondly, as life is changing over time, the government should review and revise regulations regularly to make proper modifications in which inhabitants have the rights to raise their voice. When laws are not reasonable, it can cause rebellion or revolution. This would lead to slow down society’s development.
In conclusion, it seems to me that to live safely and function well in society, laws and rules are a must because of all reasons I have mentioned above.
It is true that each country need to have rules and laws that all citizens must comply. Some people argue that residents should be allowed to be free to do whatever they want, I strongly believe that legislation is essential to ensure social safety.
To begin with, rules and laws are dispensable because without them, a community or a larger scale, a nation could be faced with several problems. In terms of crime, the number of criminals would be reduced thanks to strict punishment. A murder, for example, could receive capital punishment or even the death penalty in some countries. If laws and rules are not insufficient strict, there will be more likely to have more law violators. From the perspective of transportation, some regulations such as wearing a helmet when driving a motorbike or commuters must stop when a traffic light turns red are significantly crucial to alleviate traffic congestion or accidents. These rules and laws not only no means to contradict human rights, but also enable people to freely act and behave within a common standard.
Besides, legislation should be appropriate to ensure citizens' legal rights. Firstly, rules should be equal for both genders. Take traditional Vietnamese regulations as an example. Regarding education, It was such an absurd law that all girls were not accepted in any school while boys were encouraged to attend higher education. Secondly, as life is changing over time, the government should review and revise regulations regularly to make proper modifications in which inhabitants have the rights to raise their voice. When laws are not reasonable, it can cause rebellion or revolution. This would lead to slow down society’s development.
In conclusion, it seems to me that to live safely and function well in society, laws and rules are a must because of all reasons I have mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12459016393 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84678916432 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629508196721 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0420503055 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6875 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464350874097 0.244688304435 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12851088597 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162578252525 0.0667982634062 243% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.326696270878 0.151304729494 216% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.310159696774 0.056905535591 545% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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