Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.To what extend do you agree are disagree?
The important problem associated with living in abroad of your country is to speak another language . many people believe the speaking with non mother tongue causing a problem for a person in his environment. Opponents argue that taking the foreign language does not cause a trouble because the people there understand the situation like that. I agree totally with this claim and I will support my opinion with probes.
First of all, some people believe that speaking another language imply to many issues: misunderstanding the surrounded world causing dangerous matters and put you in embarrassed cases as well as bad effects on your job or study. Moreover, he or she will not do the assigned tasks in your work because of the misconnection. For example, the study has conducted in one of the developed country illustrate 50% of expat student suffering in fully understanding of courses which affect on their marks.
The opponents to this opinion argue that the talking the foreign language can not impact on your situation because the people in that country estimate the case of expatriate and help them in learning and acquire the skills for adaptation. For instance, a TV program in BBC station called adaptation showed most of expats from undeveloped country work and study in British without noticeable problems.
To sum up, many persons in our society believe the talking foreign language causing a problems because the misconception for someone in a work or a college. Others argue that no need to think about that because the human has key feature named adaptation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, of course, as well as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07307692308 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72905613549 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5188671332 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.909090909 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183761435113 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649119609108 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409488134137 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102910067075 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288725495138 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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