many believe that fast food industry are causing bad effects on people health, changing their eating habits and negative effect on environment. Do you agree pr disagree with statement.
Many people think that fast food business had a very bad impact on people health and also causing damage to daily environment as well. I also agree to the view because, it is hurting every individual and his health.
First of all, every person is getting over weight because of fast food because every one prefer less time taking food in terms of time saving, however after well known fact that eating burger, chips etc is causing problem of getting fat, people are still not avoiding to eat. For example in uk a restaurant comparison of five year was showing that percentage of time taking meals dropped almost 50% and now they were eating fast food from same restaurant, which saves time of people. Eating regular fast food can save time but can creat health issues.
Secondly, it is most often says that fast food meals are also count as low protein food, furthermore news paper was showing that people how eat junk food days a week are dealing with problems of hair falls low amount of calcium in body as compere to them, who eat vegetables .For instance Australian government was running a campiness 3 months ago that people must avoid eating junks in daily routine, because docter’s were receiving thousands of cases related to fast food patients. Junk food can be more harmful in daily life.
To sum up, people must not eat fast food every day to ramin fit and to beat health issues. I believe that avoiding junk food and eating healthy food will help us live more and happier.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 260, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoiding eating'.
Suggestion: avoiding eating
...em of getting fat, people are still not avoiding to eat. For example in uk a restaurant compari...
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Line 3, column 321, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...example in uk a restaurant comparison of five year was showing that percentage of...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'counted'.
Suggestion: counted
...ften says that fast food meals are also count as low protein food, furthermore news p...
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Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
... count as low protein food, furthermore news paper was showing that people how eat junk fo...
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Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...owing that people how eat junk food days a week are dealing with problems of hair...
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Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y as compere to them, who eat vegetables .For instance Australian government was ...
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Line 5, column 277, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... as compere to them, who eat vegetables .For instance Australian government was r...
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Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...s compere to them, who eat vegetables .For instance Australian government was runn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, for instance, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15859909337 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.694326131 49.4020404114 271% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.888888889 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3333333333 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.3333333333 7.06120827912 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250963726419 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118727930239 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060743571259 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174437367539 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407393665116 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 11.3001002004 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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