In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining.
Why do you think this is happening?
How can this issue be solved?
In the contemporary world, in the majority of nations the quantities of animals and vegetation are becoming less. This is mainly caused by the pollution of air as well as deforestation so certain measures need to be taken.
Polluted atmosphere is one of the most serious issues that lead to the loss of animals and plants. The usage of vehicles is the main reason that results in provided trend. Fuels that are used for driving a car contain hazardous elements as a result in the process of internal combustion release smoke causes a damaging effect on ecology.
Furthermore, cutting down trees for construction purposes leads to the reduction of forests. Nowadays, numerous efforts are taken to urbanize areas of countries however there are not sufficient places for erecting buildings therefore the territory that belongs to forests is reduced. Owing to these forests can turn into deserts which means, that myriads of species may lose their food sources and habitats that can end up with their death.
The possible solution for this might be organising preserve zones aimed at taking care of them. If this plan is realized it may be more beneficial to save animal and plant planets. In these spaces much focus would be on feeding appropriately, breeding as well as improving their health.
Moreover, imposing taxes by government on those who pollute the nature would be advantageous too. For instance if there is one that has been noticed for polluting then he might be obliged either to pay for the damage caused or clean the area that was polluted by him. In this way countries could save animals and plants from extinction.
In conclusion, the organisation of preserve zones and introducing penalties on natural harm are strongly recommended.
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
- In many countries the number of animals and plants is declining Why do you think this is happening How can this issue be solved 84
- In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people Why might this be the case Do you think this is a positive or negative situation 61
- In the future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying To what extent do you agree or disagree 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06896551724 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7253249269 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9990123321 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179783760248 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616221582093 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707865849603 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0825134533902 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602547249001 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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