In many countries, people like to eat a wider range of food than can be grown in their local place. Therefore, much of the food people eat today has to come from other regions. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh disadvantages?
In some countries, individuals prefer consuming various food which come from other nation rather than their local food. While I believe it might a positive trends for local people can taste another regions foods and increase the knowledge about other cultural, as well as, enhance trades oversea, it may decline the number of local food that people can consuming
On the one hand, it is a opportunities for local people in another nation can use another quality source of foods. In doing so, citizens can gain knowledge through the new food, such as their cultural. Additionlly, some foreign people can taste their nation foods when they are in another countries. Furthermore, if the number of people who consuming oversea foods are increase, it leads to the fact that a large amount of trade oversea are also increase. Therefore, it may increase the opportunities for the economic of nation can develop in the future. For example, the nation that can trades their local food in worldwide will surely have a good relationships with other nation
In the other hand, the number of people eating local foods is decline dramatically if that trends become more well-know. Take the surveys in 2016 from Viet Nam for instance, it has showed that nearly 89% people chose the source foods from the other regions, and just 11% citizens are prefer local foods, as a result, the number of local foods that no one bought will be destroyed and a lot of local people such as farmer will be push to the edge of broke. In doing so, it can decrease the number of job, particularly in surban areas, lead to the fact that the agricutual of countries are slowly develop in general, the economic in particular
In conslusion, there are several benefit of eating another nation foods that it can help local people gain knowledge and create a good relationships with other regions. However, it may be harmful for a particular individual and the economic in term of development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...can consuming On the one hand, it is a opportunities for local people in anoth...
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Line 3, column 24, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a opportunity' or simply 'opportunities'?
Suggestion: a opportunity; opportunities
...can consuming On the one hand, it is a opportunities for local people in another nation can ...
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Line 3, column 447, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'increased'.
Suggestion: increased
... large amount of trade oversea are also increase. Therefore, it may increase the opportu...
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Line 3, column 650, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'relationship'?
Suggestion: relationship
...od in worldwide will surely have a good relationships with other nation In the other hand,...
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Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'preferred'.
Suggestion: preferred
...ther regions, and just 11% citizens are prefer local foods, as a result, the number of...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'developed'.
Suggestion: developed
... the agricutual of countries are slowly develop in general, the economic in particular ...
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Line 7, column 26, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun benefit seems to be countable; consider using: 'several benefits'.
Suggestion: several benefits
... particular In conslusion, there are several benefit of eating another nation foods that it ...
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'relationship'?
Suggestion: relationship
...people gain knowledge and create a good relationships with other regions. However, it may be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in general, in particular, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88323353293 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55513444597 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.455089820359 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.344510417 49.4020404114 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 163.1 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.4 20.7667163134 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.1 7.06120827912 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344485549542 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152763955281 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719755717573 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240278168236 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484898258637 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.