Many people believe that cities should not try to preserve its old historic buildings and instead, they should destroy them and replace them with modern buildings.
To what extent do you agree?
Ancient buildings are being proposed and then replaced with the modern apartment instead. I honestly don’t disagree with this suggestion, because these historical buildings hold the sacrifices and blood of our country heroes.
Firstly, ancient buildings kept the memories and feelings of old people who was suffered wars back in times. These building will be just like their mascot although it can’t be a religion. Also these buildings bring a lot story to tells and can be a book for futher generations,which I believes this tory can make the kid interested and understand how great is our heroes are and grown mature with it .
In addition , destroy all of these buildings also brings many harm effect to our environment such as dust and toxic gases . these will lead to global warming and also flu virus to everyones, so cut down ancient is a mess and disaster for us. Futher more this ancient will increase our country proverty and tourism occupation will be fully ultilized . this help our country a lot in selling product and advertising too.
In conclusion, ancient buildings bring so much advantages if our government can fully charged country proverties , ancient building keep our country beauty of traditional even help other to gain their spirit to working and have fun in our lives
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 188, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...mascot although it can’t be a religion. Also these buildings bring a lot story to te...
^^^^
Line 2, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ry to tells and can be a book for futher generations,which I believes this tory c...
^^
Line 2, column 277, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...nd can be a book for futher generations,which I believes this tory can make the kid i...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 286, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'believe'
Suggestion: believe
... a book for futher generations,which I believes this tory can make the kid interested a...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 400, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... our heroes are and grown mature with it . In addition , destroy all of these bui...
^^
Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... and grown mature with it . In addition , destroy all of these buildings also bri...
^^
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun harm seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much harm', 'a good deal of harm'.
Suggestion: much harm; a good deal of harm
...troy all of these buildings also brings many harm effect to our environment such as dust ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...environment such as dust and toxic gases . these will lead to global warming and a...
^^
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...ironment such as dust and toxic gases . these will lead to global warming and also fl...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...urism occupation will be fully ultilized . this help our country a lot in selling ...
^^
Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...sm occupation will be fully ultilized . this help our country a lot in selling produ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 43, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... conclusion, ancient buildings bring so much advantages if our government can fully ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 87, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'charge'
Suggestion: charge
... advantages if our government can fully charged country proverties , ancient building k...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 113, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ent can fully charged country proverties , ancient building keep our country beaut...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, honestly, if, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04186046512 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68952667193 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623255813953 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2402986717 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141234457087 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688888294521 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612471717776 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102914534617 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605375833786 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 188, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...mascot although it can’t be a religion. Also these buildings bring a lot story to te...
^^^^
Line 2, column 264, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ry to tells and can be a book for futher generations,which I believes this tory c...
^^
Line 2, column 277, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...nd can be a book for futher generations,which I believes this tory can make the kid i...
^^^^^^
Line 2, column 286, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'believe'
Suggestion: believe
... a book for futher generations,which I believes this tory can make the kid interested a...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 400, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... our heroes are and grown mature with it . In addition , destroy all of these bui...
^^
Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... and grown mature with it . In addition , destroy all of these buildings also bri...
^^
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun harm seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much harm', 'a good deal of harm'.
Suggestion: much harm; a good deal of harm
...troy all of these buildings also brings many harm effect to our environment such as dust ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...environment such as dust and toxic gases . these will lead to global warming and a...
^^
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...ironment such as dust and toxic gases . these will lead to global warming and also fl...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...urism occupation will be fully ultilized . this help our country a lot in selling ...
^^
Line 3, column 351, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...sm occupation will be fully ultilized . this help our country a lot in selling produ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 43, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... conclusion, ancient buildings bring so much advantages if our government can fully ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 87, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'charge'
Suggestion: charge
... advantages if our government can fully charged country proverties , ancient building k...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 113, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ent can fully charged country proverties , ancient building keep our country beaut...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, honestly, if, so, then, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04186046512 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68952667193 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623255813953 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2402986717 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.4 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141234457087 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688888294521 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612471717776 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102914534617 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605375833786 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.