Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their countries. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to change this negative attitude towards international tourism?
A topical issue in modern society is overseas tourism. This has caused negative impacts on several countries. This essay will discuss the reasons why this is occurring, and offer some solutions.
There are two main reasons why people think that international tourism is a bad thing. Firstly, people feel dissatisfied when they travel to another country. To elaborate, it leads to culture shock, people will not be able to eat any food due to weird flavour in traditional dishes. Secondly, people have difficulties with language barrier. For example, people do not speak English, but they still choose to travel overseas to experience, and hence, they find it challenging to communicate with locals to give directions and ask for help.
However, there are a number of ways to resolve this issue. First of all, people can find out information online carefully about a certain country they want. Therefore, they do not feel bored and reduce excitement when they travel. Furthermore, people should learn several sentences to greet and communicate with native speakers. As a result, people may explore and experience more without language barrier, and they can make new friends.
In conclusion, tourism overseas is a topic which is very relevant to modern society. However, I believe that the best way to deal with this problem is by seeking information carefully about culture and tourist destinations before travelling. If people want to have a wonderful holiday in another country, they will have to prepare basic knowledge for their travel.
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: communicating
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, as to, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1311.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35102040816 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90787037551 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632653061224 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0320381225 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9375 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3125 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.125 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248385753324 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780491101345 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626988724425 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15025592584 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422790787251 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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