People believe that individuals who make a lot of money are the most successful. Others say that those who contribute to society like scientists, teachers are the most successful. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
It is often think that people who earn much money are the most successful; however, some individuals claim that those who serve society are the most successful. This essay will analyze this trend and give my overall opinion.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why people make numerous money are the most successful. Firstly, they usually gain helpful experience from others. In fact, they know how to apply practical skills for earning money, and therefore, they can make a profit to any areas which they toward such as running companies or selling furniture. Secondly, individuals who earn a mass of money often get in well with each other in business. For example, many CEOs in companies usually integrate together to support and deal with problems in business, and it makes a strong link between many companies.
On the other hand, there are numerous reasons why people who contribute to society are the most successful. First of all, their accomplishments are known by the public because they have influences on society. For instances, scientists carry out research in the laboratories to find out something new to provide knowledge for many people, and therefore, they would become successful if their research was useful in life. Furthermore, they serve society by helping many people. To be specific, many teachers assist children know how to write and read through teaching in schools.
In conclusion, both people who make much money and contribute to society are successful people. I am of the opinion that to become successful is challenging to anyone because people cannot measure success levels to an individual. If people attempt and pay off their efforts in any areas they want, they will obtain successful achievements for themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02787456446 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56755418536 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 287.0 20.2975951904 1414% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1443.0 106.682146367 1353% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 287.0 20.7667163134 1382% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 177.0 7.06120827912 2507% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382943748522 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.382943748522 0.084324248473 454% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264968157611 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0884095497581 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 145.8 13.0946893788 1113% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -219.83 50.2224549098 -438% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 115.2 11.3001002004 1019% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.37 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.73 8.58950901804 241% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 9.78957915832 541% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 116.8 10.1190380762 1154% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 10.7795591182 492% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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