Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing.
Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?
These day more and more people start doing extreme events such as bungee jumping and paragliding. This essay first will discuss reasons of this trend and finally argue whether it is a good idea to do.
In my opinion, there are two reasons for why people undergo such risks like that, first is being addictive of adrenaline. Some people just cannot be away from extreme life because they see these kind of activities as the most addictive drugs such as cocaine. For example, one of my friend who lives in US is an addictive person to the crazy activities. If he stays away from these kinds of events, immediately start sweating and cannot do his daily jobs. Second is problems that people have to face push them to do these extreme things since in their lives they trying to go through some serious hardships that's why getting closer to the death make them forget about the problems and they see these utmost activities as a relief.
When it comes to the talk about whether it is a good idea doing intense activities or not, I think they are horrible activities to do if you do not want to die. Even though they say the gears and gadgets that are used are the safest, it is hard to trust man made equipment's because 5 years ago in my hometown a man lost his life when he was climbing to a mountain. In the video tapes that I watched, it can be clearly seen that when he was on the middle of the mountain, suddenly the rope ripped off and he felt down on to the rocks. After I saw that video I could not even hike for a long time.
When all things are considered, these days people want to experience extreme activities like climbing because of addiction and forgetting about problems. However, being too much close to the death is not a good idea.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'These days'?
Suggestion: This day; These days
These day more and more people start doing extrem...
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Line 4, column 190, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...away from extreme life because they see these kind of activities as the most addictive dru...
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Line 4, column 607, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...ng to go through some serious hardships thats why getting closer to the death make th...
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Line 13, column 218, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... close to the death is not a good idea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, so, for example, i think, kind of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46296296296 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27475626823 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54012345679 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1056324231 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.230769231 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.23076923077 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263077057233 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865332567965 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641611442177 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155658113456 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706821618631 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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