More and more people think there is no need for printed paper newpapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
It is true that the mobile phones are now used all the time for business and individual phone calls. Although, there are many negative impacts both for individual and society. But I would argued that these are outweight by positive impacts.
On the one hand, there is one major issues of negative impacts for almost people nowadays to humorous in live with others. Firstly, many people usually tend to make small tasks on loud voice who is certainly effect on other people in surrounding public garden or theme park. Secondly, mobile phone is also an unhealthy life for some people. Because, it is attract a large number of user for working on the internet or chit chat with their friends day to day. For example, people is always spend much time for smart phone will be able to have more brain disease or autism.
On the other hand, Firstly, in some developed countries, technological computer or mobile phones are always update up to minutes. Thus a large amount of people tend to communicate with others by smart devices. Its more faster and convenient in high-speed communications. Secondly, obvious advantages are instantly set up in some groups to connect with others and it update information more faster and easily to tackle in some crucial issues. For instance, such as a examination of “ielts” test, the results sent to joiner on the computer and a mobile phones make a difference in method can apply for any examination.
In conclusion, mobile phone play an important role for almost people in over the world now. But there are both negative or positive impact in their life, thus we should control mobile phone more reasonable to tackle emergent issues effectively.
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... or printed newspapers is continuing as a important role of many modern countries...
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...rmation for over people in the world. On the one hand, in recent years, the in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, still, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11333333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90997518126 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8848010604 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112494821828 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045963619659 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472869937699 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075872950294 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581187872425 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.