Most world's problems are caused by over-population. To what extent do you agree of disagree>
There exists an opinion that over-population is the main culprit of the majority of problems over the world. From my personal perspective, I completely agree with this school of thought for several reasons.
One vexing problem worth mentioning is the shortage of accommodation in many major cities worldwide, especially in the densely populated areas in the city center. The primary cause of such an issue is the enormous number of migrants from rural regions and immigrants from foreign countries moving to these cities in search of better jobs or for higher education. Despite the fact that some authorities try launching strict laws to prohibit this phenomenon, the population shows no sign of decrease and thus, accommodation facilities are not built enough to satisfy people’s demand. For example, Beijing and Ho Chi Minh are two well-known cities where government has put much effort to combat overcrowding issue but fall to gain satisfactory result.
Another matter is the pollution and traffic congestion affecting negatively citizens on both their health and quality of life. It is obvious that the huge amount of toxic gases such as carbon dioxide or methane releases into the atmosphere from the industrial production process and means of transport is the main cause of air pollution. This leads to the fact that compared with less populated regions, people live in densely populated areas have a higher rate of suffering from health-related problems. In addition, dwellers also complain about the worse condition of traffic as it stagnates to the fluency and efficiency of their work and study. In rush time, for instance, people tend to be stuck in traffic jam for numerous hours due to the massive number of vehicles pouring out the road.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that over-population triggers many above-mentioned issues. Therefore, actions should be taken to slow down the population growth all over the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 2, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30322580645 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89123689456 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7955093591 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.461538462 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162373732218 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597303883373 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071147058399 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12070110618 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698982623118 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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