Natural resources such as oil, forest and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems does it cause? How can we solve these problems?
In our contemporary society, people are consuming natural resources including oil, forests and fresh water at an ever-increasing rate and this is an overriding issue. There are a range of undeniable drawbacks associated with this trend, and in my opinion, there are still a number of feasible remedies that can be implemented to mitigate this issue.
There are a variety of detrimental impacts on human lives arising from the overuse of these natural resources. Firstly, it poses a threat to the vigorous economic growth of all countries in the world. This is due to the fact that fossil fuels like oil and coal are the foundation of a host of modern industries and if we continue to consume them more, there will be a shortage of these materials for industrial zones in the future. As a result, both prosperous and impoverished nations will not be able to manufacture as many commodities as their expectation and this will result in some repercussions for the whole country. Another danger related to the over-consumption of natural resources is the deterioration in our ambient environment. The reason is that these days, a host of trees are cut down to make way for the construction of high-rises and agricultural zones, and the burning of oil and cutting down of trees greatly contribute to carbon dioxide accumulation in our atmosphere, which is the main causes of global warming.Therefore, the more trees are cut down, the more polluted our environment is. In addition, the overconsumption of these natural resources also beget the loss of ecological balance. This is because the natural habitats of wildlife species is gradually destroyed owing to the cutting down of trees for industrial and agricultural purposes, and in turn, many wild animals are on the verge of extinction. Furthermore, the consumption of natural resources also begets some negative effects on human health. For instance, the proliferation of the use of fresh water in developed countries results in the fresh water deprivation in a variety of African countries, and in turn, a host of children living in these nations fall victim to perilous diseases and most of them are decimated.
However, there are still a range of methods that could be taken by the whole society to combat this problem. One feasible remedy is the usage of renewable and sustainable sources of energy in our daily lives. It is true that more and more countries pay attention to this solution and the authorities in various countries cooperate with top-class and high-profile conglomerates to investigate new energy including solar power or radioactive power in order to gain a deeper insight into these sources of energy and find out the most efficient way to consume them expeditiously, which is of paramount importance. For example, the Vietnamese government works arduously and put more resources into installing solar panels in Southern regions of Vietnam with the aim of generating electricity for local dwellers here. These renewable sources of energy are expected to become an efficient substitute for fossil fuels and a sustainable foundation for future industry to foster the economic growth and protect the environment simultaneously. Another noticeable solution to this issue is the installation of water filters in developing countries. One obvious example is that in Algeria, the authorities in this African nation are collaborating with leading enterprises from Western nation, which are light-years ahead of this country in terms of technique and infrastructure, to provide their citizens, especially children in rural areas with purifying machines with the aim of enabling them to get exposed to fresh water, which does wonders for their comprehensive development during their developmental stage. Last but not least, the authorities should make use of the far-reaching influences of social media to disseminate information about challenges of the overuse of these natural resources. If they are informed about challenges that we will face when these natural resources depleted, this comprehension will become a disincentive for the general public to consume oil, water and other natural resources and curb the ever-increasing rate of these resources.
In conclusion, there are distinctive repercussions related to the proliferation of the usage of natural resources, and although it is an uphill task for the whole society to combat this issue, there are still a variety of remedies that could be done to resolve this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 13.1623246493 266% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 10.4138276553 269% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 120.0 41.998997996 286% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 27.0 8.3376753507 324% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3784.0 1615.20841683 234% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 717.0 315.596192385 227% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27754532775 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.17463580148 4.20363070211 123% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12860557837 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 326.0 176.041082164 185% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.454672245467 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1227.6 506.74238477 242% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.736172181 49.4020404114 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.0 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5909090909 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.90909090909 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238079461362 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071348411983 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0694032608905 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159251826703 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453836737491 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 194.0 78.4519038076 247% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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