Now many people spend less and less time at home. What are the causes for this? What are the effects of this on individuals and on the society?
Nowadays, people tend to spend less time with their family members. In my opinion, this development can be established because of bread and butter. There are several reasons why it will affect individuals and family bonds in modern society.
Firstly, many people spend less time with their families due to the generation gap. Generation gap has been a longstanding problem due to the differences in beliefs and ways of thinking from which parents it is very difficult to understand their children and have a serious conversation so their children often meet their friends outside and share their stories and difficulties with them. In addition, another reason people usually spend less time at home is economic burden from which they need to spend half of their day working. For example, in businesses or factories they usually start work at 7am and finish at 6pm. Then, after hard days of work, they often take time to relax by doing leisure activities such as playing games and listening to music. This is so they don't have any free time for their families during the day.
Secondly, the tendency to spend less time with family brings both the individual and the family closer together. For instance, individuals who are not close to their families tend to be more problematic. Children growing up without family affection are more likely to have emotional problems and don’t know how to solve it. Children will deal with their own feelings according to their own thoughts such as harming themselves. Besides that, without parents' control and attention, their children can be exposed to and absorb offensive behaviors and inappropriate words online from which the children after growing up will carry the inappropriate habits that they learn so it will have an impact on society.
In conclusion, people should spend more time at home to strengthen family bonds and reduce the negative impact on individuals and family members.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...and listening to music. This is so they dont have any free time for their families d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10062893082 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57268069719 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544025157233 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 488.7 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.6302816223 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.133333333 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.26666666667 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206006093309 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0909721076867 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798029147635 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149731033156 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496406973369 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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