Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?
The increase in the number of people looking for alternative medicines and treatments over traditional medical practices has become a growing concern in recent years. Some individuals show a lack of trust in modern medicine and prefer alternative medicine and treatment instead of visiting their usual doctor.
On the one hand , alternative medicine has been known to provide natural remedies without the adverse side effects that doctor medicines can often produce . Many people also believe that alternative medicine offers a more personal approach to treatment that considers the individual as a whole , taking into account both physical and emotional health. Additionally, traditional medical practices are often very expensive , which make people poor and middle class hard to access the necessary treatment . Alternative medicine is often more cost-effective , making it more accessible to individuals who cannot afford traditional medical care . But on the other hand, some argue that alternative medicine is not supported by scientific research and therefore its effectiveness cannot be guaranteed . In some cases , alternative medicines and treatments can even be harmful , particularly if individuals believe they can be used to replace traditional medical care . Moreover , alternative medicine can sometimes lead to delayed treatment, which can cause more harm than good . Lastly , conventional medicine has been refined through years of research and development , and alternative medicine can’t replace the established medicines and treatment plans of traditional medical care .
In conclusion , i think that using alternative medicines and treatment instead of visiting doctor can be a positive development if using it correct because using alternative medicine can provide a more cost-effective approach to treatment but it can’t
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, look, moreover, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.86891385768 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16283239019 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535580524345 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0882351977 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.454545455 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28054827957 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128146449992 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765492643086 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244495534185 0.151304729494 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639034280409 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.74 50.2224549098 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.06 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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