Nowadays more and more people are spending less time at home.
Why do you think it happens? What effect does this have on individuals and society?
That is vividly apparent that increasing members of society are spending most of their time outside their residence. While this trend might have reasons like demanding jobs or uncomfortable houses, it can bring about some possible outcomes to the individuals and the society in general.
A couple of reasons can explain this trend. Nowadays, enterprises motivate employees to work for longer hours, employing incentives or shared profits; many seek to work overtime to increase their salaries dramatically. On the other hand, due to sky-rocketing homeland prices, seldom do people have the chance to buy spacious, well-equipped houses. So, an increasing number of people would prefer to enjoy their time outside while sightseeing with their friends and families to escape from their tiny, gloomy houses.
There are some positive effects both on individuals and society. Individuals who spend most of their time at work offices, working on business projects, can earn higher salaries, which ensures a luxurious lifestyle for them and their families. Moreover, studies undertaken by the psychology faculty of Stanford University show that leaving home and engaging in either work or leisure activities can induce happiness and be a useful measure in fighting depression. All in all, with more people outside working hard or enjoying their times within recreational centers, societies will become more vibrant and active.
To sum up, I believe most people choose to spend most of their time outside their home, because of their job requirements and tiny houses. This decision has beneficial impacts on individuals’ welfare and happiness, and as a result, societies will be full of vim.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun seek seems to be countable; consider using: 'many seeks'.
Suggestion: many seeks
...employing incentives or shared profits; many seek to work overtime to increase their sala...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, well, while, in general, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46007604563 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8307569831 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642585551331 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0291723886 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.666666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20242496335 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774189083705 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437982189741 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131116590021 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374938355417 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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