Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?
In modern society, many couples tend to become parents at a later stage of their life. There are several reasons for this phenomenon, which have a significant impact on both family and community.
A few reasons can be given to explain why young people choose to delay their parenthood. First, due to the competitive labor market, they need to fully concentrate on their job in order to have financial stability before having their first child. They believe that money is the key factor that ensures that their children may enjoy higher living standards, better education services, and most importantly, respect from others in society. The second reason for newly-weds to decide against early child upbringing is that they want to acquire more knowledge and experience of raising and educating kids, as parenthood requires tremendous responsibility and patience.
However, this tendency could have many negative impacts on family life and society. To begin with, pregnancy and childbirth at old age can be risks for both mother and baby. Scientifically, if people give birth when they are too old, the babies being born might be less physically healthy. If any complicated maternal health problem arises, the life whole family would be turned upside down. Moreover, the generation gap can make parents struggle to communicate and sympathize with their children, which can lead to a major conflict in family relationships. Last but not least, due to the declining of the young workforce, the labor shortage may occur, therefore causing severe economic and social consequences.
In conclusion, concentrating on work and the pressure of being a parent are the two main reasons for delaying the parenthood of newly-weds. Consequently, this could lead to negative impacts, including lowering the babies' health as well as increasing the generation gap.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'babies'' or 'baby's'?
Suggestion: babies'; baby's
...egative impacts, including lowering the babies health as well as increasing the genera...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33788395904 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83465950844 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641638225256 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8459882748 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.714285714 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212288486455 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671001183186 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483932016488 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120199512337 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611540680871 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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