As part of education, students should spend a period of time studying and living in a different country to learn language and culture.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a prevalent idea among the segment of society that getting education in a foreign country would be invaluable experience in terms of learning language and culture. I am a firm believer of the notion that since this journey may have its undesired outcomes for students, the otherwise learning is more recommended.
First of all, studying overseas requires students to get used to autonomous life that is in fact sore spot with most of them. To begin with, spending money for basic needs, which in the first glance may seem straightforward for most of the people, is what challenges the young as they lack enough experience for it. In general, it can undeniably accepted that since parents usually know the amount of goods in home better, they obviate the involvement of their children with shopping. Furthermore, parents are also aware of the importance of controlling budget which is dismissed by most of the young people. If they do not spend money wisely, it is possible for them to face with financial burden. Hence, studying abroad for the first time may put the student in a situation which they may even barely find time for their studying.
Secondly, being in different culture with the people having non-identical mentality with them is another reason why young leaners may not gain insight into other linguistics and cultures' characteristics effectively. In this case, students are more like to experience culture shock because it will take them long time to comprehend the fact that they live in completely different place being far from their parents or other close people. As a result, this can cause distractions leading to lose of focus on their studies. In addition, they do not have to travel abroad for this purpose as the internet, nowadays, serves for everything that people wish to learn. Hence, the easiest way to acquire something is to search on websites providing wide range of information
To conclude, the opinion that an efficacious method for acquisition of language and culture is to live in the corresponding country for getting education is proposed by some. However, I am a strong advocate of the idea that this option is not favored due to the feasible difficulties such as spending money and culture shock. Instead, using internet can save the students from the problems mentioned above.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'accept'
Suggestion: accept
...e for it. In general, it can undeniably accepted that since parents usually know the amo...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, in addition, in fact, in general, such as, as a result, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03092783505 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7451926115 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551546391753 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.8303507946 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.133333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8666666667 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181312801085 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581035398393 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040472348697 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115057928342 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242135933743 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 347, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'accept'
Suggestion: accept
...e for it. In general, it can undeniably accepted that since parents usually know the amo...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, in addition, in fact, in general, such as, as a result, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1952.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03092783505 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7451926115 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551546391753 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.8303507946 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.133333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8666666667 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181312801085 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581035398393 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040472348697 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115057928342 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242135933743 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.